Our reflections
- There was a lack of variation of shots in the second half.
- We could have used more camera movement in the second half.
- To avoid having one actor being the voice for two characters, we could have done with more voice actors.
- The soundtrack could be more interesting and individual/unique as it is quite generic.
- More snappy, concise dialogue to make it more interesting.
Teacher feedback
- The story is fine and makes sense.
- More shot diversity and movement is needed.
- Lacking institutional conventions such as production and distribution logos at the start.
- The titles should continue appearing through the conversation.
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